BIG BOOK BRAIN BARF

Document created: Jun 26, 2017

Last modified: Jan 1, 2020

Word count (excluding comments): 2,905

Contents: Basic proposed series outline, Basic proposed book 1 outline, Basic proposed book 2 outline, Speculates on FBH’s plans and motivations, Speculates what would happen if Chance and Samson used to date, Speculates how Samson would corrupt Chantian, Speculates the need for Samson, Speculates other reasons for Chantian breakup, Speculates the Chance blowup scene and what lead up to it and what followed, Speculate how to universe (time travel) works

''I know I've done a lot of these, but I'm inspired now. I'm going to try to plan out the books from start to finish. Very general, then to the nitty gritty.''

''I'm thinking 4 books. Not a trilogy, because trilogies are wack. The first book is simple, Mae learns she's the CO and stuff, she's suspicious of Kid, she's wrong, and the parents return. This is because of time travel shenanigans. You know. The second book is where drama and plot happens. Im thinking Mae is either shaken out of her detective-ness or it's even sharper now. Actually, it would most likely be sharper, but she is playing the part of the concerned friend, so it's sort of hidden. Before, she was more open about her suspicion, but now A+N are back, and Jona is having a breakdown. As for book 3, I can't figure out much just yet. Since I don't know what 2 is about. But the ending is where all secrets are revealed: Chance blows up, Brian is time traveling, yahoo!! (But wait: What if that was revealed in the 3rd? I mean, they've been keeping this secret for SO LONG, and it's kind of cliche, ain't it? A dick move, having the entire book focused on other things, and BAM: suddenly, time travel!! Let's strive for all that in 3 then, and 4 is REALLY getting down to business, the other PSBUs are called in, getting REAL intense. Yeah. Good plan.)''

''So, book 1 in a nutshell: Mae is Average College Studdent. She has an odd knack for being able to tell general things about what will happen, but it's all based on feelings. She thinks it's intuition. Because of that, she gambles a bunch. Coming home from such a gambling excursion, she is kidnapped. This sends the PSBU in a riot, causing a plethora of crazy things to happen there, like C+C breaking up, Brian working his way into the ranks of chefhood, and Vick becoming unhealthily invested. When she awakes, the Baldies are practically worshipping her. Mae p much goes along, because intuition says so. They tell her she was blessed with this power to use it for good, but when she was little her parents ran away with her to use it for themselves (that's that's the “Baldies believe happened”). Mae is kind of suspicious-- like, “YEAH, pfft, have you SEEN the belly in my dad?” and kinda puts it in the back of her head, because intuition and she's being spoiled. She makes friends, and it's p chill, until she starts to get bored. Then she starts to question everything, and she's not really hiding it. Eventually she delves too far (which her intuition told her it would), and then it's more like she's uncovering the truth. This is about 3 months in. She pisses off the head honcho some way or another, and the put her in “time out” or something childish like that, and Mae is p keen on escaping now. She feels it in her bones, and, because she's self motivated, she does or does not attempt prison breaks. It depends on if filler is needed. But the CHANCE COMES!! And THAT'S the real escape. So she's whisked away, and COMPLETELY entranced by the man. She's introduced to the PSBU, which she's suspicious of, considering her previous experience, but eventually they fill in the plotholes, in memory and story, which builds her trust more solidly. She's not 100% on board, but she gets there, slowly. They don't let her out much because the Baldies are hella good at finding people, but it's nothing like before. Because she's so suspicious, she starts to misread Kid. This takes us maybe halfway through the book. This takes us on a laborious montage of filler convos that establish backstory for characters,  or personality,  or relationships, and Kid research. Maybe some side quests with other charries. Bluh. Eventually, we get to the end and Mae unmasks Kid for who he truly is… a party thrower. He is throwing a surprise party for Jona, because his 18th birthday arrives. So after, Mae is kind of let down, but, like, that means everything is okay, right? So she tries to let loose, and has fun. But then there's a ring at the door, and Mae goes to open or whatever, it's probs vick! But no! Jona parents! And that ends book 1.'' 

''So book 2, what is that about?? Drama and plot. Let's see: from Chancellor's POV, the parents weren't supposed to return. So, like… hmm. Hey, maybe like, that's why he shows up at all?? I mean, rn he's showing up b/c he can feel his existence unravelling. That makes sense. Nvm then. What are the baldies doing?? Well, they are under a new control now. The FBH. She's cruel. Aso, I'm thinking the baldies aren't all that bad. They're a bunch of witches basically, who were told Mae was the enemy and we're for taking her down or out of commission because they said she was a bad person, but then they… get the know her? And suddenly, the baldies are like, “this is not what we were told. Have we been living a lie?” And then here comes the FB head, all guns blazing, like, “NO, SHES EVIL, BWAAA!!” Here's the thing: in TLC, the baldies are vicious because they believe Mae and co to be vicious. Then they get a leader who is devious from the get go. But when she goes back and inteferes… suddenly, they have met Mae. She's not bad. She's not evil. She's a good person, if strange. So they're all like, “hey, she's not really an enemy…” and if the FBH weren't there, I'd even say that they'd apologize and make up for their junk. But then… the FBH IS there, and she's got beef. Or a complex. She completely takes over the baldies and plots to ruin Mae's life, ensure she doesn't have a family, all that junk (btw, don't forget, that's Mae's wish in life. A family of her own.) Okay, so the first book is basically about humanizing the baldies, which is interestin, bc it's usually done the other way around. So the second book… let's get in FBH’s head for a sec: her plan to control Mae by making her a baldie has failed. Her plan to break up the gays was a failsafe in case Mae would escape, which she did. She saw that the gays we're getting along again, so she had another trick up her sleeve: the parents. So basically she's been judging the situation for a while and had many ideas to how it would play out. She'd done her research. So basically, if the parents are back, she'll predict that Jona will be in a bad enough mood to not to be romantic. But then, in case that fails? Time to stop meddling and take initiative. Maybe it's like… kill jona? They can't kill Mae for some convienient reason. But… chance was supposed to die. Izzy and Daniel too. I think the FBH suspects the universe has a blood quota. Someone of that line had to die, so...why not jona? Let's brainstorm things to do if done being pissy fails. The obvious thing would be to ensure there's no chance they COULD be together. And they've already tried kidnapping Mae, and THAT didn't work… maybe, then, getting Jona to leave?? Maybe, like… up the ante and make him go with his parents?? Yeah… maybe this is where faeries come in?? Maybe, like… well, the baldies have ties with all. And originally, they were meant to be very tied with nature. Protect nature, ties with all magical things. Why would they go to the faeries tho?? I feel like the faeries are close to the'' 

''Unrelated, but what if Chance and Samson used to date?? Like, what if in the past Samson's family was originally stationed at the PSBU in America, and they they got transferred to England? It would have to happen, like, before Christian got there. OR: Oo, so you know how Christian and Chance didn't start dating until a year after knowing each other?? What if that's the reason?? Chance was involved with Samson?? I wanna say that Chance still made a valiant effort to get close to Christian in this time. Maybe even… okay, hear that idea out: so, Samson and Chance are dating (ew), and it's not really the best or most healthy relationship ever. Chance doesn't think it's going very well, but Samson is good at convincing him it's fine. I wanna say Samson's dismissive of Chance and makes him feel unimportant. Then here comes Christian, who's pretty much the exact opposite from Sammy: he's nice, he's quiet, he's thoughtful. And he cares what Chance has to say. And so, Chance gets this crush. But he doesn't break it off with Sammy. I think Chrissy hasn't found out about his sexuality yet, but he's starting to. OO, IDEA: so like 10 months since Chrissy gets there, Samson's family is transferred to England. They keep the relationship going and all, but chance feels sad about it. Chance largely keeps it quiet though, so as not to worry anyone.''

''Eh, yannow what, this disinterests me. It's getting too convoluted. Maybe Sammy was like Chance's first kiss or something? Like, they were two boys who thought they might like dick, and so they kissed eachother one day. Oh, another thought, maybe Chance doesn't actually HATE Samson when he's there. Maybe they have good memories together, and when he's there Samson is acting like a good person, even a pleasant person. But, Christian sees through it. I would like to think that Chance would trust his boyfriend, but then a good way into it, he calls him out because he think he's being a little jealous and unintentionally possessive, because ”Samson wouldn't do that.” And so, that makes Christian panic that he's a bad person and it hurts to hear his boyfriend of all people say this, so he breaks it off.''

''UGH. Why is Samson's character so HARD to decide on?? Should be even be a thing?? Initially, he was this guy Henry hired to break up Chantian. But hen isn't the main baddie now. So, how does he fit into the plot without seeming contrived?? I guess this hinges on if Mae is kidnapped, since there was that whole thing about Samson as a slueth to find her and shit. Also, I just had the most real idea: The Chantian relationship drama?? Doesn't happen until LATER books. I mean, think about it!! I know I love them, but the audience doesn't know them yet!! How can you root for a relationship with a basis of drama?? Maybe during one and two they're the happy couple I need them to be. But at the end of 2, chance fucks something up and the angst happens in 3? 3 is where the girl comes in, and it looks like it might be over for good. But then, chance gets blown up, and suddenly, it's all good. Everyone's a little bit more mature.'' 

''So, if Chantian doesn't have problems in book 1, then what's the plot? Side note, maybe Samson isn't the thing that breaks them up, but instead it's a conflict of actual interest?? Like, once they all find out about Chancellor, Chance is in the boat of changing the past for the better, but Christian believes things should develop normally?? And there's a whole thing that it gets out that Izzy and Daniel are going to die, and Christian is still adamant that they not interfere, and Chance says some hurtful things basically saying that he's allowing them to die and that's as bad as killing them, doesn't he love them?? And this decimates Christian on the inside, and Chance in a fit of impulsive anger rushes off to save them. That's why he's there when the place explodes??? And I feel like after Chance rushes off, Christian rushes off after him. Like, he knows the situation is insane. He knows that there's no way to save them, that he's rushing into a deathtrap. He also knows that Chance loves him, and that the reason he's doing this is because he's so full of blind love and hope. And even though what he said stabbed him from every angle, he feels a solidarity that if he can't stop Chance from pursuing this certain death, he also can't stand by and let chance do this alone. He has this realization moment that that must be how Chance feels about Izzy, since they're really close. He figures, he'll follow him and help him as best he can, thinking that he would rather die in that inferno supporting his loved one than live with the fact that he did absolutely nothing to stop it. And so, when he gets to the thing, he left a little after a chance so Chance got a good head start, he pulls up and is ready to rush into the collapsing building. Now, idk if I want him to spot chance.coming back with the two over his shoulder, or if h doesn't see them at all. I think not seeing him at all just uos the "they never would have made it" aspect. So, Chrissy pulls up and is about to run in, when the place explodes and he's pushed back. And so, when he gets concious enough to understand what that meant he screams in agony/disbelief and runs into the rubble to search for Chance. And I think he finds him, maybe with his legs crushed under some support beam, maybe some with his head completely covered with stuff. Idk. But he finds him, and pulls him close, not caring about any blood or anything, and just holds him and openly sobs. He genuinely thinks he's dead and it's such a terrible thought. But not soon after, the paramedics arrive, searching for people to help. They take.both Chance and Chrissy, who was also a little beat up since he was blown back by the blast. The paramed'' 

''says chance is alive but it critical condition, but Christian is inconsolable. It doesn't have to come up now, but he's all apologetic over this whole ordeal, and very much blames himself. He says that if he hadn't stopped chance earlier, he wouldn't be like this now. He fully understands the desire to rewrite the past. He now knows that if it were him in that situation, and Chance's life on the line, he would have ascted exactly the same. And so, he feels like a complete selfish dick for not understanding that about chance and his feelings for iz and Dan. And he also feels like he should be greiving for Izzy and Dan, but he can't do it, his mind is only on chance. He realizes again that chance is his rock. And without his rock, he can't stay stable. And so, when chance wakes up, all Christian wants to do is clear up the bad blood between them. Because he understands it now. He gets it. But then, similarly, chance, when he comes too, realized something that he didn't want to realize: you can't change the past like that. And maybe even it's plot related!! Like, he found Izzy and Dan and was leading them to safety, but it seemed like every route they tried to take was suddenly and violently overtaken by some obstacle. And Chance knew it was the universe telling him to stop, that it meant that were meant to die, period, and so when it kept not happening, the universe took control and first took chance out of commission. Aka, crippling him. And when chance woke, he had to come to terms that the universe will do anything to get what it wants. And where that was bad for him just then, it also means that the universe is against the baldies and what they're trying to do. Aka, prevent Mona. Hey, maybe that's why they try this indirect route then?? Like, maybe they tried to kill Mae, but the universe kept saying no, it's not her turn, stop messing with it?? So, the baldies have to make an indirect path?? Maybe the universe can't control what people think or believe?? Like, that's why multiple universes exist, because it's not situations that spark them, but free will?? Like with Kaden?? "To jump or not to jump?" Or with Chancellor and the sharing the thing?? And so, stubborn outcomes are stubborn. It's the indecision that starts a new path, and the universe just has to roll with it, because it just can't influence those feelings?? And so, they try to kill Mae, but they soon learn it doesn't work. And so, the baldies do some serious reconsideration with their plans, (maybe even test out some theories??) And hypothesize that if they break up Mona, if they convince them to not be together, then they've won!!'' 

 

''Reading all of this in 2020 is hilarious, because so many things have changed!! Let’s think this out again: Now, we have the weres and the alpha. The were rapist, the visiting the faeries, the parents coming back, our boy Lee (should kid even be a thing?? Idk anymore...''